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Fake smiles
Contributed by
Lulu08
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 06:45:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She wipes the tears away
Fixes her make up and
Puts on a fake smile
Shes been down this road before
She knows what to say
So every one thinks shes ok
Hope and broken dreams
Is what shes living by these days
Hoping there will be a change
Some day she hopes her prince will come and carry her away
She wipes the tears away
Fixes her make up and
Puts on a fake smile
She can fool a room full of peope
But can never fool her heart
Broken peices are hard to mend
When its been shatered so much
Shes breaks down at night when everything is quiet and still
Her perfect make up is ruined with tear stained cheeks
That perfect smile finally breaks
She doesnt care when shes alone
No one can see her pain
Only when the morning comes
She wipes her tears away
Fixes her make up and
Puts on a fake smile
Knowing she has to fool the world another day
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Lulu08
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2010-04-24 06:45:44]
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Re: Fake smiles
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 07:09:53 AM AEST
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Well this is painfully sad. Your really illustrated the
drain of pretense. These lines really got to me,
She can fool a room full of peope
But can never fool her heart
wow. No kidding, right? This was very well written.
Well done. -- Achelois |
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Re: Fake smiles
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by duff on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 09:47:40 AM AEST
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Although sad you have written this in such wonderful fashion that emotion is provoked throughout the entire passage. An amazing piece of writing.
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Re: Fake smiles
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:21:32 AM AEST
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| Wow, this poem is really good. I had tears in my eye's while reading. You did a really good job with this poem. |
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Re: Fake smiles
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by ExoM on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 03:39:02 PM AEST
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| This poem is pretty good! I think it seems like it would make good song lyrics? |
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