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Love is Blind
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 12:11:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Love is Blind.
They say love is blind,
Yet it enhances the other senses.
I touch, smell, feel and hear my love.
Copyright ©
aliopterix
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2010-04-24 00:11:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love is Blind
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 12:37:33 AM AEST (User
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Well I know it can certainly make you blind.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Love is Blind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 01:21:08 AM AEST (User
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Uh, Al? Haiku are Japanese poems, usually written on nature, but we as poets generally use many subjects.
However, the norm for the rhythm is:
First Line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Love is Blind
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 02:30:19 AM AEST (User
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I have to say that I admired the honesty of this poem. The reader automatically feels that you believe what you write and then they too begin to believe. Simply beautiful, that love can enhance us instead of blind us etc. Wonderful write yet again. =) |
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