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Ode to Love
Contributed by
ShadowMan
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Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 09:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eyes sparkle with the light of a thousand fireflies,
Your smile can brighten the darkest heart.
Your voice can calm a mind full of worries,
Your compassion is your strongest part.
How can I get you to see,
The amount of love I have for thee?
How can I get you to know,
The bounds, and lengths I am willing to go.
For with you, there is no equal; no compare,
No maiden so lovely, or so fair.
No greater depth, no bigger heart,
For you and I, are set apart.
My heart will always be true,
My mind will always be on you.
Copyright ©
ShadowMan
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2010-04-23 21:45:21]
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Re: Ode to Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 10:46:37 PM AEST
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If she don't get it after reading this, then she has a problem.
Such a beautiful dedication of love.
This is a very powerful write. It's makes one envy such love you have in your heart.
blessings,
emy
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Re: Ode to Love
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 07:46:58 AM AEST
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There is a certain amount of beautiful release with the
declaration of love for another. And you have done so
with a poetic charm. Hard to resist.
Great post! -- Achelois
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Re: Ode to Love
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:23:32 AM AEST
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| Here's a poet' heart singing a song of deep heartfelt love, can feel the warmth and the strength of a heart beating for another creating a beauty worth the read |
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Re: Ode to Love
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:35:05 AM AEST
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| An absolutely beautiful poem. Loved every word of it. |
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Re: Ode to Love
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by angel_blue on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 01:09:00 PM AEST
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| love your Ode to Love. |
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Re: Ode to Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st January 2012 @ 08:24:50 AM AEST
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I find myself agreeing with Breezy / Achelois, as I often do. However, I suppose sometimes I am the bearer of doom and gloom...really can't force someone to love you. Really like the poem, though, Nice writing.
Thanks,
Tim
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