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Impatience
Contributed by
ShadowMan
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Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 09:40:04 PM in AEST
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My mind races as I wait for your return,
My heart pounds as images of you, my mind has burned.
I cant tell the future nor the past,
but I can see trouble coming fast.
By instinct, I go to protect
but instead end up a nervous wreck
How long must I wait by this gate?
Is my helplessness due to coincidence
or this fate?
Can I escape this overwhelming worried state of mind
or will it follow me until the end of time..
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ShadowMan
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2010-04-23 21:40:04]
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Re: Impatience
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by duff on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 07:57:40 AM AEST
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You can feel the speed and nervousness of heart in your words and this just races. The imagery carries the reader through this piece and in the end it is a joy to take part in.
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Re: Impatience
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:20:17 AM AEST
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| Powerful heartfelt write,can feel the struggle,and the want to be freed from the not knowing, well written |
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