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Lost Love
Contributed by
urizen
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Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 06:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everything I do,
Reminds me of you,
This pain I felt,
You felt it too,
This non-conformity tied us both,
To be slaves of notions we should of crushed.
The most hurtful thing,
Is you're still there,
You think nothing's changed,
But my wounds are laid bare,
This salt you rub leaves no scar,
Except a crack through the centre of my heart.
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urizen
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2010-04-23 18:55:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 07:49:49 PM AEST (User
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Great poem. The imagery is quite effective. The poem shows how painful losing someone can be. The last couple lines are extremely effective.
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