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A Rose
Contributed by
rfburn
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Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 03:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You foolish and mindless mass,
How shallow and how odd,
To willfully discard the past,
And Ignore roads previous trod.
Now your efforts are all vanity,
And your words are always poor,
For your days are filled with nonsense,
Because it’s history you chose to ignore.
So therefore in that twenty sixth year,
Why would it be your concern?
For the night he left the tavern,
Could he know he Wouldn’t return?
Now with a soul frozen in time.
Why is it do you suppose?
His spirit enters the churchyard,
And why would he leave a rose?
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Re: A Rose
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 05:26:12 PM AEST
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Wow,
I've read poems and songs about the rose but this one is quit unique.
Awesome writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: A Rose
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by duff on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:03:16 AM AEST
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This is wonderfully haunting and there lies a mystique that hides itself with one eye peeking in the shadows. Splendid imagery!
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Re: A Rose
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:05:43 AM AEST
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| Great story line starting here leaving the reader wanting to know more and the rose a perfect touch well written |
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