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Second Glance
Contributed by
unpredictable
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Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It took a second glance
to realize what I saw
I stood in amazement
and frozen in awe
What I saw was amazing
and wanted you from then
You had a sweet sense about you
and fogged my mind of all men
It was you that I wanted
how to get you I was lost
A guy like you with a girl like me
I wasnt sure of the exact cost
How could I convince
you to give me a chance
All it took for me
Was a second glance
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unpredictable
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2003-04-13 16:45:00]
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Re: Second Glance
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by full_blur on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 05:21:55 PM AEST
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| This poem has great flow to it. I really love symmetry in poetry, and I think you do a great job here. |
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Re: Second Glance
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:39:30 PM AEST
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beautiful your words freely flow
Michelle |
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Re: Second Glance
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by Funnygrl_03 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:19:03 PM AEST
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| Hey I really like ur poem. It was really good. I can relate |
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