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Flowers in the sky
Contributed by
Mic-E
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Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 02:15:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Lights appear and fade away
as all concept of time disappears
days pass like minutes
and each second lasts a lifetime
all you can do is wait
as you look to the sky in hope
knowing that you can't escape your fate
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Mic-E
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2010-04-22 14:15:17]
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Re: Flowers in the sky
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 02:31:14 PM AEST
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| very powerful write deeply expressive in its description and poignant in its meaning |
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Re: Flowers in the sky
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by Jessi95 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:19:29 PM AEST
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| wow that is realy good it shows real emotions |
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Re: Flowers in the sky
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 08:07:41 PM AEST
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I like this write. It is true that one cannot stop time and fate has its will upon humanity. Nice writing!
Heidi |
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