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Shining Beauty
Contributed by
ShadowMan
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Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:39:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blood, sweat, tears, bone
All this have I shed for my beauty alone
Her style impeccable
Her grace so free
It comforts me and lets me easily breathe
For the love of my life, the smile on her face
It brings me back to a happy place
A place where I, myself am energized
This maiden so fair, with a heart so sweet
Can lift this grumpy old man off his feet
I'm glad she's mine, this maiden of mine
The love of my life so divine
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ShadowMan
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2010-04-22 06:39:04]
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Re: Shining Beauty
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:56:56 AM AEST
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A beautiful display of romance and devotion. This is
enough to melt a heart, reducing it to sighs. A wonderful
write. Well done.
-- Achelois
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Re: Shining Beauty
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 12:21:44 PM AEST
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| Can lift this grumpy old man off his feet lol really enjoyed this write a real heart warmer and declaration of love well written |
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Re: Shining Beauty
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd April 2010 @ 10:30:13 PM AEST
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This is awesomely beautiful.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Shining Beauty
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by dewittd18 on
Friday, 20th January 2012 @ 05:41:50 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed ur poem. and the devotion shown in it. |
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Re: Shining Beauty
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by Nailgrass on
Monday, 23rd January 2012 @ 06:45:02 PM AEST
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| i can be grumpy at times and reading this lovely poem will help me be ungrumpy with my shining beauty. very nice |
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