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Temporary
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 12:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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If this body were to become ash,
I ask you not to miss it
For it is not the sum of me----
It is only a temporary vehicle;
A mode of transportation for the soul.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
... [
2010-04-22 00:59:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Temporary
(User Rating: 1 ) by aliopterix on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 01:23:59 AM AEST (User
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Succinctly and nicely put, giving us hope for a future journey after this one has ceased.Well done, your friend, Aliopterix. |
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Re: Temporary
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 06:29:08 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
Exactly as you put it. A wrapping for our joys and
woes.
Tommy
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Re: Temporary
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jessi95 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:12:50 PM AEST (User
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Very good |
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