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Song of the Forgotten
Contributed by
Uncooked
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Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You would think
A best friend would stay forever
Through love and hate
And strength and weakness
And all those good things Birthday cards say
But friends are still human
And humans are still selfish
And best friends eventually wander away
It's not fast like running
Its slow like sinking into the ocean
And slipping away under the waves
Other people come along
And best friends get distracted
Until they simply don't care
About the good ole' times anymore
At first its subtle
"No, I can't come over tonight"
But it gets louder
Until they don't even answer at all
I guess thats what we get
When we put out love in people
Trust is broken like friendships
And friendships are broken like bones
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Re: Song of the Forgotten
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:26:38 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem.. i don't believe that happens with all friends tho.. you maybe just haven't found that one that you'll know will be around forever no matter what the distance or how ever old you get. Trust me they are out there... anyway.. the poem is good, and goodluck to ya.. ;) |
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Re: Song of the Forgotten
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:49:09 PM AEST
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I know what you feel like with this poem. You will find that one special friend that will be with you for all time. Great work!!
Michelle |
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Re: Song of the Forgotten
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 12:53:49 AM AEST
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| this is a fantastic poem full of meaning:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Song of the Forgotten
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by SlimStaple on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:59:09 AM AEST
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I've hd friendships end up like that.
"And friendships are broken like bones " I like that. |
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