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ashes
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 10:46:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you burned me at your rebellious stake
& I. . . I became a heap of ashen woe
that you'd return to weeping
hollow then. . . in your aloneness
nothing to take back. . .
nothing to give. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-04-20 22:46:02]
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Re: ashes
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 03:44:09 AM AEST
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| Subtle and beautifully expressed. Aliopterix |
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Re: ashes
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by Breezy on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 05:46:58 PM AEST
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I'm very impressed with how well you can convey an
image with so few words. Emotion just floods this piece.
Very well done. -- Achelois |
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Re: ashes
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 04:01:40 AM AEST
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Sometimes only a few words are needed to make a point.
Case proven here.
Nice work.
Steve |
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Re: ashes
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by xXInkInMyVeinsXx on
Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 03:41:24 AM AEST
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| I love how you've used the ellipses; it really gives me the sense of the overwhelming emotions the voice is feeling. Awesome job :) |
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Re: ashes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 04:12:40 PM AEST
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| I love the way you expressed such emotion with so few words. |
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