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Going Down the Pole
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 06:33:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Climbing the ladder,
looking down and trembling,
the goal is next time
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-04-20 18:33:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Going Down the Pole
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST (User
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I was watching my niece in the park debating whether to try to go down the pole or not and it made me think that that is one of the key things I remember being an issue when I went to the playground as a young child,well expressed great observation and has brought back a little nostalgia too |
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Re: Going Down the Pole
(User Rating: 1 ) by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 04:44:35 AM AEST (User
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True of any decision we have to make in life. Nice write. Aliopterix |
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