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Pathological Liar
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 02:40:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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You're beautiful,
And I bathe you in sweet nothings.
Praises,
Ones you have never received before.
You just enjoy hearing me speak,
As I worship you with words.
But, there is something I must admit,
Before this goes any further.
I'm nothing more then a Pathological liar.
Unless--I'm lying about that too?
How can you tell...
When you believe every word I spew.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2010-04-20 14:40:40]
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Re: Pathological Liar
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by JakerBaker88 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 02:45:43 PM AEST
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| Clever, with an amusing twist at its end. All in all it was a solid poem. Good job. |
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Re: Pathological Liar
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 08:46:38 PM AEST
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| Strong write well written |
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Re: Pathological Liar
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 06:01:12 AM AEST
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| Love the last two lines. A good strong read.Aliopterix. |
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Re: Pathological Liar
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by Skittlez28 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 09:50:07 AM AEST
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| awesome.. |
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Re: Pathological Liar
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by Song_of_Sarah on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 03:36:28 PM AEST
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| I really liked the way the poem leaves off with a little bit a teasing, just south of harsh. A little bit of vindictive love-hate stuff. Nice. |
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