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An Indian cricket match
Contributed by
ravi
on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Oh! the match is on; what a bore!
I soon romped into a deep snore.
Suddenly! the roguish,unruly wild boars,
emitted an ear splitting horrendous roar,
the batsman had just hit a dazzling four.
Looking away from my depleted
potato munch,
I began evaluating the crazy,
possessed hysterical bunch.
As the batsman smoothened
his white dressing,
the homely plump women sitting right above,
issued their instant special blessing.
The "flashy" piece of goods close by,
soon knitted her usual game,
the batsman is her current flame.
The wise,knowledgeable men below,
forged into a boisterous discussion,
showing no signs of volume reduction.
The rowdy pompous kids near by,
transformed into deadly,inspired snipers,
the fielders soon fell short of wipers.
The dins;the roars;the jeers;the cries,
grew into a turbulent crescendo,
the law could do little except,
to watch the fearsome develish tornado.
Young and old,healthy and cold,
all joined in the fabulous feast,
man on that particular day in history,
had become a wild carnivorous beast.
My advice to you Oh God ! sitting high and low,
do take care of your kingdom below.
You are been reduced to a dainty doll,
in front of men;with bat and ball.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-04-13 14:35:00]
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Re: An Indian cricket match
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:58:21 PM AEST
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Hi Ravi, being an avid cricket fan, I can surely relate to this!! Good picture you painted here..
And I HAVE seen the crowds at cricket matches played in India....lol...
Thanks for sharing this...
P/S..I'm from the island of Brian Lara....
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Re: An Indian cricket match
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:52:41 PM AEST
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Ravi, Iv never played cricket but with this poem I can see in my minds eye the vivid image you have painted
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Re: An Indian cricket match
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by Ravi on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:01:23 AM AEST
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| Thanx Jenni for your comments.I have seen cricket matches in West Indies and I must say you people are really very colourful and enjoy every minute of your life |
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Re: An Indian cricket match
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by Ravi on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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| Thank you Michelle for your comments.Here in India cricket is a religion and the cricketers are treated like gods. |
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