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Harm
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:01:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wail. . .
& tangle towards particulars
that ride upon obscurities
. . . mayhem palpitating
until the demons dismount
to close my incisions
that wait like crimson. . .
stitches melting into black
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-04-19 19:01:48]
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Re: Harm
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by duff on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:45:51 PM AEST
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This is quite beautifully dark and although short it is written very well.
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Re: Harm
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by spud on
Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 05:56:02 AM AEST
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Hi Elle,
I won't pretend to understand entirely the gist
of this poem - but I sense boredom and/or
monotony.
Short, but nicely written.
Tommy
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Re: Harm
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 05:18:48 PM AEST
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I know this. Oh, how I know this. Mayhem palpitating... Exquisite. My veins hum insync with this black song you've composed. Or should I say crimson. What a lovely colour.
Gorgeous write, elle.
Riding shadows, counting the scars,
~S.
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Re: Harm
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by ming on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 11:40:24 AM AEST
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Hello Elle,
Can my demons play with yours? :P Great write!
'until the demons dismount'
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