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Talked
Contributed by
Jessi95
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Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 06:29:08 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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After telling someone
What you did to me
I thought my life would get better
I thought that would be the key
I was wrong
And I should have never talked
This is just one door
That I should have kept locked
My true family is torn apart
And I always feel so alone
No matter how many times I cry
I am always on my own
I try to talk to my true brother
Who is also my best friend
But my mom tore us apart
And made the talking come to an end
I miss having him here
Because alone is how I walk
And all I can ever think about
Is how I wish I had never talked
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Jessi95
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2010-04-19 18:29:08]
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Re: Talked
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by northernlights on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:49:04 PM AEST
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| Sometimes through emotional upset we release words that we regret saying on hindsight,and this seems to cause more trouble but if your brother is sincerely your best friend then I hope you will both resolve this and become stronger through it |
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Re: Talked
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by duff on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:51:49 PM AEST
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Sad and your emotions are felt in your words. A very touching write.
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