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Her
Contributed by
Desi
on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She sits alone in her room.
She wears all black and hates the world.
Her dark hair hangs in her face,
Her eyeliner is smeared, streaked down her pale face.
She writes her thoughts. Her thoughts of anger and hate in her notebook. Her face is twisted into an angry scowl. She resents the world, and hates everyone in it. But she doesn't know why, she just...does. Her friends see it. She hides it from her family. They don't understand, they wouldn't.
She sits alone at lunch, her friends are so fake. People stare, but act like she's not there, because they're scared. People are scared of what they don't know, what the don't understand.
She listens to her angry music, before bed every night. She wishes she could wake up and die.
Sometimes she sees theings. Things that are unnatural, they aren't real. She sees them in her head, she also hears voices. They won't go away, they won't leave her be. She's weird. They say, she reads tarot cards and reads the stars. Sometimes, she even reads their minds.
She cries inside, but her eyes are cold as stone. She soul is dark and gray. Her heart is black as day.
You may know this girl, you may hate her, I don't care. This girl is me.
Copyright ©
Desi
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2003-04-13 13:05:00]
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Re: Her
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:17:10 PM AEST
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| this is great, i was her too at about 17, you really moved me with this one, thank you for sharing, hugs n' love to you, nessa |
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Re: Her
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by Maha on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 02:47:13 PM AEST
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| I believe most of us have experienced such feelings and thoughts, but you have expressed them so clearly and frankly. Thanks. I enjoyed your poem! |
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Re: Her
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 03:23:33 PM AEST
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| wow... good stuff. |
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Re: Her
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by Ju-Ju on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 04:44:45 PM AEST
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| wow.. great poem.. reminds me of myself :( |
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Re: Her
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by Desi on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 07:13:56 PM AEST
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| Thats me except I'm 12 |
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Re: Her
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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wow this is great. Nice job. I dont hate you!!
Michelle |
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Re: Her
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by the_temptation_of_suicide on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:53:25 PM AEST
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| that girl is me 2. every single word describes me n my life. young and depressed. i dont know what to say, it was amazing! i'm lost for words. thank you so much for sharing that with us. if u ever want to talk or just to say hi, pm me |
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Re: Her
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 03:02:28 PM AEST
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| Wow, great poem! It reminded me of me so much it was scary! I think it would describe anyone at some point in their life. Great Job! Lots of love! Lisa |
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Re: Her
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by FunkyMonkeyMania on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:56:31 PM AEST
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DESIREE I LOVE U. THATS WHATS IMPORTANT! IF U THINK I DONT THEN JUST TAKE A LOOK AT ALL YOUR OTHER FRIENDS AS WELL. WE ALL DO, I HOPE U CAN SEE IT. I HOPE SINCE THIS WAS WRITTEN LAST YEAR U KNO BY NOW WE LOVE AND CARE ABOUT U. I REALLY DO. I LOVE MY DESIREE!!!!!!!!
EMILY |
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