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death mask
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 04:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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turn away
as if there is no lesson here,
moaning
to be learned
no awkward face
revealing
fates conjouling ties
no creche of lips to sear with love's respite
no, not even old skin,
seeping truths
from complicated pores
oh cracked & marveling. . .
selfish mirror
a tourniquet for dreams. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-04-19 16:48:44]
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Re: death mask
(User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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This is just wonderful writing. It's full of amazing imagery
and poetic musings. There isn't any one line I could
single out as best--the whole piece is just so moving.
Fantastic! -- Achelois |
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Re: death mask
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by ming on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 09:21:15 AM AEST
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Please tell me WHEN your book is for sale!:) Great words...
not even old skin,
seeping truths
from complicated pores
ming |
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