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Love Breakes You

Contributed by bluegordon on Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:23:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Love Breaks you
A poem by blue
Love breaks and tares at you.
... rips you all apart..

when in your own minds eye...
... you dont feel
it in your heart...

the times have always been bad
as far as you can see,

your weary and your broken from
what she sais is destiny....

the evil that they do i dont think
that they see,

but in all the times...
ive been to you...
i know its got to be.

Ive taken my heart tossed it in the wind
hopeing someday all this will end.

You tossed me aside Then decided to boast
then you spoke the words that hurt me the most

I know you dont care bout me anymore, but if you would open up your heart...Im knocking on your door.

There is only one way that i can make you understand
but i cant do that...im just a man.

So you remember when you had a chance to get to my heart
And you also remember how you tore it all apart

Love Blue!

Copyright © bluegordon ... [ 2010-04-19 07:23:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Breakes You (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkWolf on Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 07:56:34 AM AEST
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I can not think of anything to say but WOW. This is very sad and yet very beautiful. and I know just how you feel

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