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Loss of Control
Contributed by
aliopterix
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Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 11:36:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Loss of Control
The thoughts and fears gain momentum,
Growing in power, creating a fulcrum
To separate mind from body, body from soul
A devilish ploy to make me lose control.
The pain in my head becomes a throbbing
Of such momentous pain it is robbing
And stripping the layers of reality,
Threatening my damaged and fragile sanity.
As soon as it starts it seems to subside
My thoughts and dreams return to reside
In the head and the brain which unfortunately lacks
A resistance to these malevolent panic attacks.
Alistair Muir
17/04/2010
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aliopterix
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2010-04-18 11:36:07]
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Re: Loss of Control
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by JakerBaker88 on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 04:29:00 PM AEST
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| You wrote on a topic I can strongly relate to. Each line illustrated the anguish a person can sometimes go when thinking about their future and themselves. Very strong write. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Re: Loss of Control
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by DrcGaimer on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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| Great job descriptively, finding powerful adjectives. |
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Re: Loss of Control
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 09:32:29 PM AEST
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| Going into a psychological whirl with no choice,hurricane of confusion so intense that it cannot sustain and ebbs again to leave you with the relief you still have your sanity,effectively descriptive as you take us there and bring more understanding |
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