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Crushing On You
Contributed by
landsleyalexandre
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Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 07:04:46 AM in AEST
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Can’t speak my mind
Words won’t come out
It’s all gibberish when you are there
Losing my strength, can only pick up this pen
I feel so heartbroken
Here goes the pain, I’m not even up
And I’m already down
I wish I could tell you what is in my heart
You have been on my mind, but then again
Few memories, so ours are the only good ones that I kept
And because of you, there is a raging fire inside of me
I want to scream, but I can barely breath
Suffocating just on the thought of you.
Oh p.s. ………… I like you a lot.
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2010-04-18 07:04:46]
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Re: Crushing On You
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by duff on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 10:00:40 PM AEST
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You did this so very well to show just how one can feel when someone comes along and captures our attention. This was great.
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Re: Crushing On You
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 03:59:04 AM AEST
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Sometimes we just feel so awkward trying to think of ways to say what we really feel.
You have captured this feeling in the words you have written here.
PS............it was good.
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