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Angels Should Never Cry
Contributed by
Enlighting_lies
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Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 01:59:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Among the clouds lie kingdoms of gold
Of which on earth many tales are told
Creatures of great beauty above will fly,
Eternally in bliss, they shall never sigh.
One such angel so innocent and pure,
Her heavenly rapture impossibly obscure.
She will fly forever in her paradise above
With spread wings as white as a dove.
The heavens, a place without pain,
Where the sublime will always reign.
Holy and gracious without revealing
Any evil shades of wicked feelings.
Whilst the godly creature looks down below,
A land of pain and torment lies so low.
This wicked world of scorched earth and fire,
With the darkest intentions fuelling desire.
Innocence is lost when the devils shriek.
Demons haunt the pure making them weak.
In a world of eternal darkness without hope,
How can its victims learn to cope?
So many wars and young men dying,
People lost and children crying.
Power is sought and lives destroyed,
A cloud of destruction has been employed.
Lost and empty, feeling sorrow within,
An angel's grieving caused by the ultimate sin.
Tears fall and angels should never cry
For worlds which doomed themselves to die.
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Enlighting_lies
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Re: Angels Should Never Cry
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by Chamaron on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 07:33:38 AM AEST
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| This is so magnificently crafted and flows so poetically. A fantastic piece on the nature of humanity and the battle between good and evil. |
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Re: Angels Should Never Cry
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 07:37:05 AM AEST
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The imagery is quite stirring in this write and it opens up the mind for the reader to explore your words and what you have created before them. Another well written poem my friend.
take care
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