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Me and Only Me
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 02:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How do I love you?
These feelings they leave me--
Unsure.
Bewildered.
Speechless!
I seem to be stuck in a stupor.
At a loss for words,
Unable to express these overwhelming emotions.
My heart beats rhythmically inside my chest,
By your simplest of gestures.
...Secret glances reserved only for me.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2010-04-16 14:58:25] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Me and Only Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 03:37:46 PM AEST (User
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I loved the simpilicity of this poem as well as its sweet message. In so few words you conveyed to the reader your overwhelming feelings of adoration for another. Simply beautiful. Well done. |
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Re: Me and Only Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 04:01:10 AM AEST (User
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interesting and well structured take on infatuation/besotted love - we never grow out of the possibility, thank goodness.
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