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Acid words
Contributed by
death_not_be_feared
on
Thursday, 15th April 2010 @ 08:56:30 PM in AEST
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abstract
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Youre moving, youre dancing.
Youre spinning.
The world sees it and the world feels you.
Can you see the beauty the glistens on your warm face?
You are the sun, I think; and if you arent, I dont want to live in a world that doesnt rotate around you.
I want your gravity to pull me in.
The wind welcomes you; it sings, it sings, it sings.
Your eyes see what mine dont- your skin breathes in and out and I feel nothing but your warmth.
You are the earth. The earth is you.
Earth.
Trees.
Wind.
Fire.
Grass.
Soil.
Core.. Core... Core
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death_not_be_feared
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2010-04-15 20:56:30]
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Re: Acid words
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 01:12:14 PM AEST
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I believe this is the first piece of yours that I have read. I enjoyed this. It flowed well. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Acid words
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by JakerBaker88 on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 01:21:02 PM AEST
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| I liked the flow of this poem as well as your choice of words to convey what you were feeling. This definately was a solid piece of poetry and I can't wait to read more from you. Keep on writing my friend. |
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