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Diary
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 15th April 2010 @ 08:46:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Secrecy's tablet,
more meaningful with each word,
locked for purity
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-04-15 20:46:03]
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Re: Diary
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 05:51:17 AM AEST
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Wonderful Piece.
I hope my diary never gets in the wrong hands...lol
Deadwriter
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Re: Diary
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by Spike on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 04:15:35 AM AEST
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the little that is so much. Nicely wrapped.
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Re: Diary
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 06:39:10 AM AEST
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Oh, I love the description, "Secrecy's tablet". Another unique and wonderfully written haiku. :)
Seléne ~
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Re: Diary
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2010 @ 01:07:42 AM AEST
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Locked for purity
then... prying into my life
I now feel betrayed
with so very few words, you got me to thinking of that locked diary and the feeling we might feel if someone broke into it.
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Re: Diary
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by windowguy on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 10:01:50 AM AEST
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| Perfect description. The first line is awesome! Deserving a 5! |
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Re: Diary
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by RitalinKid on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 10:47:03 PM AEST
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| I generally miss the point of Haiku. I am ignorant to the craft, save for the syllabic structure. But I have been reading through yours and you are simplifying the art beautifully. |
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