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All innocence gone
Contributed by
ivybabe
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Thursday, 15th April 2010 @ 08:28:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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as death looked into her eyes he saw the pain and suffering of a young child the world had taken all innocence from her body as he cradled her in his arms he grew stronger with the pain and torment she had suffered...
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Re: All innocence gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chamaron on
Saturday, 17th April 2010 @ 07:53:36 AM AEST (User
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This is so powerful. I cannot comprehend how you've captured it so simply and so intensely, but I applaud you. |
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