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Of thunder fall and tears
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 06:56:14 PM in AEST
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Dead leaves deceive the sun
Sing serrated fingers
At closed glass doors
Coil and curl
At hardhearted eyes
Dance benignly
At the end of time
Small hands pass
Unconsumed by time
Tap gently at the glass
Pass early
Across unseen stars
Sing tiny laughter
Still me with thoughts
Of thunder fall
And tears
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2010-04-13 18:56:14]
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Re: Of thunder fall and tears
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by SlipyNarcis2112 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 08:07:04 PM AEST
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| Not much to criticize here, great write! |
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Re: Of thunder fall and tears
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 08:08:59 PM AEST
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cute, Abe,
Play on.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Of thunder fall and tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 11:24:28 AM AEST
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Every line is beautifully written and its hard to pick a favorite out but i love the opening to this write.
Dead leaves deceive the sun
That line is amazing and this is a great write.
take care duff
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Re: Of thunder fall and tears
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 01:10:17 PM AEST
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You play well, A. This was really nice.
Be well,
~dawn :) |
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