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Tears of Blood
Contributed by
cindyhawkins
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Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 11:44:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The essence of you, torments my wretched soul,
The intensity of your smile, my desolate heart craves,
The torment you instilled deep within my being’
Tears of pain, tears of blood, confusion searching for reality
Yet my desire for you burns with a scorching intensity
Till pain and anguish dampen the smouldering embers,,
Bringing sorrow and suffering to my mournful heart,
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cindyhawkins
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2010-04-13 11:44:05]
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 05:54:45 AM AEST
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| Beautiful tortured write, pivotal line, tears of pain, tears of blood, confusion searching for reality, well written |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by Jessi95 on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 07:12:03 PM AEST
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| I really like it, Good job |
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