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I hear the voices of past soldiers
Contributed by
lothas
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Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 09:34:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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I hear the voices of past soldiers
Talking to me away from life
Telling me to push on push on harder
Listening to them
Listen to them hear their stories
Pray from them
Remember them and their stories
Release your heartache into the void of nothingness
Believe in them
Listen to their stories listen hard to them
Close your eyes and hear them talking in your ear
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Re: I hear the voices of past soldiers
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by joydeep_nath on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 11:40:00 AM AEST
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| nice work!! i guess its written from point of view of a soldier.prima facie |
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Re: I hear the voices of past soldiers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 01:14:44 PM AEST
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Your words have so much behind them they haunt the page in a spiritual force reminding never to forget the acts of bravery they have fallen for. Well done.
take care
duff |
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