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Phobia
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 05:37:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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That t i n g l y feeling.
Like a sixth sense,
When you just know...
Somethings there.
Eight little legs,
They crawl along your skin.
Breath catches in your throat,
Building up for what to come.
You think your heart stops
b e a t i n g.
No--You're clearly still alive--
If your scream is any indication.
Glancing down.
Nothings there.
P a r a n o i a
It's setting in.
Still--You're afraid to sleep at night--
And you begin to itch.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2010-04-11 05:37:54]
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Re: Phobia
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by Chamaron on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 10:11:10 AM AEST
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| Wow, scary feeling. I like the rhythm of this. Great job. |
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Re: Phobia
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 14th April 2010 @ 10:09:06 PM AEST
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i get this scary feeling alot esp. before sleep.
i have to clear my head for second to feel fine,
but the next second i'm uneasy again.
i like how u compared it to a sixth sense,
a sense of some kind of danger/death.
an effective, creative and different poem!
take care
-K.Z.
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