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happiness
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
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this pain in my throat wont go away
it makes me kinda happy
kinda sad it wants to stay
if i could i'd let it fade
to make me numb a little longer
all i seem to do is complain
but this pain is pleasure which i crave
the sores on my hand have been here for days
they made me kinda happy
kinda saddened when they stayed
if i could i'd let them rot away
first wont you make me numb
that pain is pleasure that i'll never crave
i've been in pain so long
that i cant feel
i've been in pain so long
that now im bored.
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Re: happiness
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 04:16:37 PM AEST
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| wow...i really, really love this poem...this really touched me...i love the first stanza, infact, i love all of it, and i love the line 'pain is pleasure that i'll never crave' wow...simply amazing... |
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Re: happiness
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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This is a great write. Pain is pleasure all I can so is wow.Keep them coming
Michelle |
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