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This haunted place
Contributed by
Sammys24
on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 11:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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This haunted place
This broken glass
Lays on the floor
And I see the misery
Just like before
Its dark and evil
Shattered mirrors and broken frames
Like a war went off in here
And you're the one to blame
The blood shed is dignified
And this home is filled with screams
Of the once me running
Trying to break free
I hid the scars
And pain inside
And the beating and the breaking
That ate me alive
And the words you said
Are visible on my face
Just like the bruises
And the glass in this place
Your torture
No longer hurts me
Only haunts my mind inside
Im angry
And you're deceiving
From all the times you lied
Abusive you are
And that is all you'll ever be
But now you're the one paying for it all
For treating me so badly
Copyright ©
Sammys24
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2010-04-09 23:31:47]
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Re: This haunted place
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 12:30:25 AM AEST
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| very strong write,and the words you said are visible on my face,suffering still etched in the mind,and the anger of not being truly free of it, |
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Re: This haunted place
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by SunshineBananas17 on
Sunday, 11th April 2010 @ 01:23:22 PM AEST
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A B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L piece as usual! The use of your words is so powerful and penetrating it's almost too much to handle!
Sunshine B.3> |
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Re: This haunted place
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by Jessi95 on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 06:41:57 PM AEST
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| Wow this is a truly beautiful poem, I love the way it flows |
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