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Rain
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doug
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Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 03:57:10 PM in AEST
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Rain
http://www.myspace.com/thedustysandersband
~***~
Your silhouette , a ghostly Goddess , stands.
Red roses swaying in the rain.
The garden shadows dreaming in the dusk.
The night is sighing , the seas are wine
and we are falling so in love again.
I see you standing in the rain.
I can feel it , I can feel the dreams are back again.
Like crashing waves inside this haunted place
your love will sooth the jagged scars.
The tide cannot deny the call of moon and star.
I can't resist the ghostly kiss that pulls me
through the mist into your heart.
I see you standing in the rain.
I can feel it , I can feel the dreams are back again.
The clouds are heavy with dusk and silence.
The sea will rise , the sea will fall.
Lost cities and lost souls ,
a jewelled Goddess that held in thrall
the rain soaked shadows ( and aren't we all.)
One cigarette in summer's dying sun.
Your sea of wine is now champagne.
I feel the storm , a haunting whisper through the trees.
I see you walking through the dark and I know
you are coming back to me.
~***~
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doug
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2010-04-09 15:57:10]
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Re: Rain
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 08:17:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I tried to go to the link on but it didn't work for me. i'll try again later.
good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rain
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by JakerBaker88 on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST
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| Simply wonderful in its beauty and its form. If your poetry is any indication of your talent then I will make sure to listen to the actual song itself. You truly captured the hope, longing, and bittersweet agony that is love. I hope to read more from you in the future. |
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 11:41:31 AM AEST
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I listened to it and I have to say, wow! This is remarkable! The poetry of it is completely captivating, but to listen to the music and that sultry voice sent chills through my body! This is beauty encircling profound depth. A brilliant post!
Seléne ~
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Re: Rain
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by True on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 05:44:57 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully done. This is one of my new favorites. love the feel of it. It's beautiful. |
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