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Dream Clouds
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 07:50:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Story clouds hover;
sleep awakens fantasy;
day drifts thoughts away.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-04-08 19:50:22]
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Re: Dream Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 08:19:09 PM AEST
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soft and sweet ... just like a real dream. :sigh: It feels as if the reader could just float away on this. [ So perfectly titled ;) ]
Seléne ~
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Re: Dream Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 08:19:34 PM AEST
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You have a beautiful knack for saying so much in so few words and i find that terribly difficult and admirable. To capture your subject like that is wonderful. This is gorgeous!
take care
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Re: Dream Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 09:56:38 PM AEST
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What I've been saying all along.   |
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Re: Dream Clouds
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by spud on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 05:51:29 AM AEST
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Hi,
By far the top haiku poet on this site - as this one
proves.
Tommy
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Re: Dream Clouds
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by windowguy on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 09:37:35 AM AEST
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Ah..the best kind of clouds.
Nice haiku. |
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