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Immune to the Rose
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 12:34:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A blushing rose waits...
caressing bullet-proof skin,
immunity's curse
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-04-08 12:34:43]
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Re: Immune to the Rose
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 01:45:40 PM AEST
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| captured perfectly well written |
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Re: Immune to the Rose
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 03:38:36 PM AEST
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| a perfect poem with unneeded additions to it. me love it! keep it up. |
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Re: Immune to the Rose
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by spud on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 06:23:19 AM AEST
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Hi,
Another beauty from your eternal pool of Haiku!
Tommy
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Re: Immune to the Rose
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2010 @ 08:45:08 AM AEST
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wow. Emotion so perfectly captured! This just sets the imagination off and running wild. So much within so few words. Again, you have an immense way with this form of poetry. Well done!! SO well done.
Seléne ~
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