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Poor Substitute
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 05:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Second rate is my heart then?
Unworthy of total affection?
Though it beat swiftly,
Burning all the while for your heart,
The love it held was found insufficent-----
Pathetic and easy to part with.
Humbling to know I could never be enough;
Tragic to realize myself unloveable,
An irreproachable woman----
A third rate lover in your arms.
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2010-04-07 17:54:29]
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Re: Poor Substitute
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by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 06:30:17 PM AEST
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| Please keep comments to the poem itself. Please review site rules on commenting. Thank you Moderator_18 4-8-2010 |
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Re: Poor Substitute
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 8th April 2010 @ 01:10:54 PM AEST
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| unrequited love so painful leaving so much anger to work through,again often eating at your self leaving you undermined whilst still desperately yearning for what is no longer there,great use of words to express this |
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