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Two Ravens for you, Seven For Me
Contributed by
The_unknown
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Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 09:06:17 PM in AEST
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You can't explain something like this
It is the wind that pulled you into a hurricane
It's that moment when you look into a newborns eyes
When you can taste something violent in the air
You can smell the sweetness
So strong you'll be on the verge of tears
It's that time you got a rose, from someone so dear
And that time you pricked your finger on its thorn
It's the silver lining on the storm clouds
Up above your head
It is the smell of fresh rain on pavement
That feeling in your stomach, when you go down a hill too fast
It's the loathing and the loving
The lust seeping from your pores
It's the bad feelings and gut reactions
A nervous first kiss, and a secret told
The feeling when your lover runs their hands down your body
It's the good and the bad and everything in between
The blood, the tears, the laughs, the screams
It's something I can't explain
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Re: Two Ravens for you, Seven For Me
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 03:56:08 AM AEST
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| A whole gamut of feelings, strength and sensitivity,comfortable and uncomfortable but still the ingredients for making us feel so alive, in order to soar in the light we must also experience the darkness, thus the ravens. |
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Re: Two Ravens for you, Seven For Me
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by jmorrison94 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 07:11:51 PM AEST
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| i feel a whole lot, i see happiness then i feel this pity i should feel for the dead, i feel everything to make you fly through life perfectly, your so evened out that you see beauty in a dark colored cloud, happiness is death, its beautiful |
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Re: Two Ravens for you, Seven For Me
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 08:46:16 PM AEST
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To me this poem is simply the feeling of living. It's the feeling of true life.
Good write I really enjoyed it.
Unknown to myself,
Jen |
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Re: Two Ravens for you, Seven For Me
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by Aspirant on
Saturday, 10th April 2010 @ 02:11:07 AM AEST
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| I think of death -- how its existence intensifies the moments in life and perhaps even brings them meaning. Beyond that, only feelings come to mind, the poem seems to be centered on emotion rather than anything quantifiable. |
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