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The Burnt Angels of Bygone Times
Contributed by
Lee
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Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 07:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Everything is starting to make sense
Wait...I'm afraid it's not
I've turned a skin thing
Through the gates of ill-repute
Voices louder and louder, then go mute
I've found (out) you're not (who)
You claim to be!!!
Please echo the crowd's displeasure
Conduct the finite symphony towards a different measure
Get this lost thing away
We can't have it ruining our Last Days
I said "Leave them to fend for themselves"
She'd have known their future if only she could really tell
An Oracle or a false prophet
You held the truth, then you dropped it
I've been (opened) in my (mind)
I've found out the liar's symphony
Is needling through, producing unpleasant dreams
I've found (out) you're not (who)
You claim...none of us are who we claim to be
Copyright ©
Lee
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2010-04-06 19:40:59]
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Re: The Burnt Angels of Bygone Times
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 07:50:14 AM AEST
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Hi,
'none of us are who we claim to be'
Much to ponder there.
A fine write.
Tommy
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Re: The Burnt Angels of Bygone Times
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 02:31:35 PM AEST
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You know, I agree with Spud, though
personally, I'm trying to be more of an
open book. This was a really clever and
intelligent write that completely drew me
in. I hope that you found some solace in
giving vent to the darkness, because it
was really wonderful.
Be well,
~Loende |
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