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Mine.
Contributed by
canyouhearme
on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:39:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Kiss me one more time.
Don't leave me this way.
One kiss,
will last forever in my mind.
To feel your body against mine,
to feel your arms around my waist,
I'd give anything
to spend one more minute with you,
to know you're mine forever.
Forever was just a word,
you gave it a meaning.
Through anything, you're always there.
Make me smile again,
make me laugh.
I need you here Forever.
Copyright ©
canyouhearme
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2010-04-05 18:39:23]
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Re: Mine.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 07:14:15 PM AEST
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Ah, such longing. This is particularly hard to read as the movement in it touches me deeply. I'm sure many have experienced this kind of yearn and you have captured it wonderfully well.
Seléne ~
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Re: Mine.
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 11:56:07 PM AEST
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I like this one very much. Excellent write, you capture the emotions really well.
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Re: Mine.
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 09:55:24 AM AEST
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A creation of loveliness this really is........
Even though there is much sorrow , I really feel the warmth and love that weaves through each and every line,
longing for past steps to be retraced and fulfilled. Very nicely done x
Star x x x
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Re: Mine.
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by Jessi95 on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 08:49:57 PM AEST
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| Very nice, feels true love |
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