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Overthrown
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 02:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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White flag raised,
I surrendered
Forfeiting my heart----
Myself held captive by Love,
Yourself enjoying the spoils of war----
The battle for my kingdom won;
All that was mine now yours.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-04-05 02:35:02]
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Re: Overthrown
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:23:45 AM AEST
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Oh, you are very gracious in defeat. ;)
JB, this was lovely indeed. Sometimes losing means winning! :D This was cute and very sweet.
Seléne ~
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Re: Overthrown
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:17:56 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Selene, this was totally worth being overthrown for!
Short, sweet, this poem's a treat x
Star x x x
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Re: Overthrown
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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There is a powerful and brave meaning to the word surrender. It brings images that stick in your mind of someone who has gotten to the point of saying i have had enough and to get to that point it must take something fierce to bring that upon. This is very thought provoking and a great read.
take care
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