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Alive
Contributed by
Recyclebin
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Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 01:24:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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From the sweetest dream, warming I awaken
I heave, inhaling a gift of promises of hope to fulfill
Chemistry, no science has explanation for.
Commitment to put others needs a bit higher than mine.
A will to live, not alone, but to share tears,
Passion combined with purpose
To define would ruin the purity.
Emotionally, physically til the end of time,
Yearning in the heart, burns.
Smiling,
Bliss is the kiss of life.
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Recyclebin
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Re: Alive
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 03:49:53 AM AEST
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Hey bin, where have you been?
Beautiful work of art.
smiles, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Alive
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:58:19 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written......
Warm and inviting, this is such an uplifting piece of poetry.
Images of pure beauty supercede here Bin, I loved every word x
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Re: Alive
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by Loende on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 06:20:54 PM AEST
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Wow, Bin! This was so wonderful. Made
me sigh. Made me smile too!
"Passion combined with purpose"
That really should be the way of it.
Great job, my friend.
Be well,
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Re: Alive
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 07:28:33 PM AEST
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Very upbeat positive write. The world would be a much different place if everyone put others needs just a little higher than their own. I really enjoyed this.
Deadwriter
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Re: Alive
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by spud on
Wednesday, 7th April 2010 @ 08:10:23 AM AEST
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Hi,
A wonderful poem, and full of inspiration, hope,
and optimism in the way we view the world and
our lives within it.
Tommy
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