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The Day
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 06:47:49 PM in AEST
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The Day
Soon will be the day when I can hold you in my arms
My grip will be gentle, yet firm not ceasing until you ask
Soon will be the day when our cheeks finally together brush
The touch of your skin will bring reality to life
Soon will be the day our lips will first meet
I have spent many hours dreaming of the taste of your kiss
Soon will be the day I will look deeply into your eyes
To this point I have only traveled to your soul through your words
Soon will be the day when as I whisper in your ear
You will feel my breath as each word echoes to your core
Soon will be the day you will see the happiness you bring out in me
The love, the passion, the desire and the life I thought had been lost forever
Deadwriter
04/04/2010
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Re: The Day
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:02:20 PM AEST
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Great writing. I loved the romance and anticipation for it throughout this poem.
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Re: The Day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:02:31 PM AEST
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A gorgeous write, dw. One of beautiful longing and patience. May it be rewarded tenfold. There is something so very precious inside your words that could melt a frozen heart. And it is beautiful. :) Wonderful post.
Seléne ~
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Re: The Day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:15:37 PM AEST
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Your soul has stamped this piece my friend in such a beautiful way. A side not revealed by many but this has been shared and greatly appreciated. Again, great write full of warmth and kindness.
take care
duff |
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Re: The Day
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:56:18 PM AEST
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Anticipation, beautiful
smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Day
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 11:00:37 PM AEST
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| Soon will be the day, a lover's anticipation,expressed through sensuality and longing...beautiful line.....You will feel my breath as each word echoes to your core....strong write guiding hearts to the origins of your words. |
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Re: The Day
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:12:40 AM AEST
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Beautiful, just beautiful!
So sensual and revealing of a passion filled with adoration & intertwined love of two souls...
A wonderful poem, and a joy to read x
Star x x x |
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Re: The Day
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by steffygoesrawr13 on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 07:04:25 PM AEST
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My grip will be gentle, yet firm not ceasing until you ask
^^ i love how u imply that its her choice which adds a hint of mystery
your poetry is beautiful and powerful
beautiful words recieve beautiful praise.
keep up the good work |
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