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Rage
Contributed by
hollowjudgement
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Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 03:13:24 PM in AEST
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Rage.
Easy to muster, difficult to master,
It feels like a fist bursting through my docile nature,
Destroying my thought process in one single blow.
Its difficult to think now,
The imagination through chaos,
It scares me what I am capable of,
Looking down at my hands wondering.
The urge is getting stronger now,
I’m not sure if I can keep control,
These people around me seem to have clue,
As to what this rage will have me do.
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2010-04-04 15:13:24]
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Re: Rage
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:08:41 PM AEST
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You capture the essence of Rage beautifully in this poem. You show how it can overwhelm the mind. Very powerful!
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Re: Rage
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by Jen54 on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:34:27 PM AEST
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Amazing... its like you took the feeling out of me and put it to words.
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Re: Rage
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by hollowjudgement on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 02:05:06 PM AEST
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Thanks :)
Its one of the things in my life very hard to control, and yet. I'm mostly a calm person!
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