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An Angel Of My Life

Contributed by makari on Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 10:05:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I first saw that angel in a cold dark place...
She had some magical thing in her face...
She had the most beautiful eyes...
She then smiled which was a pleasant surprise...
I found out a reason for me...
To change who I used to be...
You are the best thing in MY world...
And I am so proud to say tat u r MY girl..
My eyes started to search for you when I was alone...
You are the most precious thing that I own...
At first i thought you as my friend...
Then i began to love U as it usually ends...

(All love begins with some fight...)

The fight grew stronger day by day...
For ur questions i just dont know what to say...
All love begins with some fight...
But it made me to think tat i might...
Go far away from you leaving you behind...
But I just can't take you off my mind...
I want your caring heart to be on my side...
And without your graceful smile , I wil surely die...
And Without you my world is just empty...
And you are so damn pretty...
I am sure that i am not going to lose you...
I will do what ever you want me to do...
All I want you to do is to love me...
And you can decide how you want me to be...
But please love me forever and dont hurt me never...
Coz I can't live with those dying moments forever...
In a lonely forest we can sit under a shady tree...
And Just think how our life would be...
There we will go , Our life full of joy...

All i want u to do is to choose me as UR GUY

byeeeee

Copyright © makari ... [ 2010-04-02 10:05:51]
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Re: An Angel Of My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 01:18:38 PM AEST
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You write bravely and honestly, which is always a sign of talent. However, I think your grasp of english may be holding you back from writing something that realizes your potential. I still found this poem enjoyable because some of the ideas you put forward resonate and your talent shines through at times. I suggest being more careful (lots of typos and misspellings), maybe editing the poem and thinking it over, pay attention to the words that you use and not just the meaning you want to convey.

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