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Another Fifty Years
Contributed by
Greenpostit
on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 07:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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I知 just too tired to write tonight
So I believe I値l call it quits.
I値l get into bed and pick up the book
That I read each night in bits.
Tomorrow I値l rise and get ready for work
But before I leave I値l write
A few lines of this and a line that
That I couldn稚 complete tonight.
Then, when I actually finish something
There値l be accolades and cheers.
I just pray to God, it doesn稚 take
Another fifty years.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Greenpostit
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2010-04-01 19:53:09]
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Re: Another Fifty Years
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 08:21:15 PM AEST
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I really like this write, especially the title.
I kindda doubt it being another 50 years.
You not only wrote a good poem but it was funny too. Luv your sense of hummer.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
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Re: Another Fifty Years
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by Loende on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 04:45:54 PM AEST
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I can SO relate to this write!!!
Sometimes the urge is there, but the effort
is not. This explains it perfectly.
Good job and thanks for admitting that, as
it's nice to know I'm not alone. :)
Be well,
~Loende |
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