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Poisoned Chalice
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 01:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hold, your Poisoned Chalice, Drink blood of lies
Cast, your mind back, then look deep in your eyes
Within, black soul,that feeds on Malice, the grudge
That, you Hold, close to your Heart, many you judge
Wings spread, rise from the Ashes, molten Flame
Burns, for Revenge , all that hate, for those you blame
For your sin, they will pay, with Blood to fill your empty
Chalice, Drink again the lies, Poison more than plenty
When, you consume, soul of men, with rampant thirst
forever, never satisfied, Lust for lie, lay deep the curse
Within, Day, will come, Chalice empty, poisoned mind
On that day, then you pray, for the Forgiveness be kind
Truth, now runs out, your empty Chalice
The, the vessel, that held, your Malice
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Fuzzy
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Re: Poisoned Chalice
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 01:12:31 PM AEST
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| You have poured it out in this one wonderfully expressive,well written my friend |
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Re: Poisoned Chalice
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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Dark with a thirst attached to every line leaving the reader wanting more. I really enjoyed reading this.
well written my friend.
take care
duff |
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Re: Poisoned Chalice
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 04:47:45 PM AEST
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This is so different for you, paul. And I like it. There is a wonderful dark appeal to every juicy line. Great post!
Seléne ~
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Re: Poisoned Chalice
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 12:11:16 AM AEST
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| A dark tale, vampiric doom in the voice...can be used as lyrics for a metal song m/ |
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Re: Poisoned Chalice
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 03:51:25 PM AEST
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What a fantastic piece of poetry. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia |
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