|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Demons
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Demons are coming
Bearing their fangs
Scars are now starting
To reopen again
Demons are pushing
I’m starting to fall
Not one person shall hear
No matter whom I call
Demons are laughing
My whole world’s disappeared
And I’m left with the only
People that I feared
Demon’s are possessing
As I fall to the floor
And my father’s wild eyes
Aren’t his anymore
The Demons are leaving
Now that I’ve been beat
Waiting for more prey
Into darkness they retreat.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
... [
2003-04-12 21:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| well, i don't know how old you are now..but this is excellent for a ten year old:) welcome to ypdc, your writing friend nessa |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:18:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow... awesome for a ten year old... |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 06:16:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i am almost 15 now, so i wrote it about 4 or 5 yrs ago |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:18:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well blackfire, great write especially for a 10 year old...and im sorry about the beatings as you spoke of...i've been there...i look forward to seeing more...
Lindsey |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:48:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is so intensely sad... well written... my blessings... |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:04:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very strong, such wonderful talent, you are something wonderful to the world of poetry. If I had half your skill, I might be something other then a no name.
The Phantom |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 02:19:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i'm glad that you channel your experiences so well....its like an outlet...you write such amazing stuff. i'm proud to call you my twin! Much Love sista! |
|
|
Re: Demons
(User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:29:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I've seen those demons. This was a very different way of describing this type of situation.
Very astute for a 10 year old! I will be reading more of your writes.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
