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full bloom
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 12:44:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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summer storm
walking the ragged
edge of sanity
silk hisses
of desprate
averted gaze
ozone and singed
velvet lies
and truth
twisted like
ribbon candy
more than the
sum of petal's
love-me-not...
full bloom.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-03-31 12:44:27]
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Re: full bloom
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 09:14:20 PM AEST
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Hi ming, I'm such a solitary creature I can surely appreciate these words.
Always & truly a treasure to read. elle :) |
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Re: full bloom
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by Loende on
Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 04:59:48 PM AEST
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I sometimes think that we really can see
the most clearly alone. I loved the feel of
this and the end was very clever.
Great job!
Be well,
~Lonede |
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