|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Grim Reaper
Contributed by
legg
on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 06:44:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
The Grim Reaper
Sometimes creeping
Undetected,
Sometimes leaping
Unexpected,
Death comes sneaking,
Undeflected,
Grimly reaping,.
Then it’s curtains, au revoir,
Gone to join the heavenly choir,
Belly up, bucket kicked -
Affairs in order, coffin picked?
Shuffled off the mortal coil,
End of story –
‘Goodbye all!’
Copyright ©
legg
... [
2010-03-31 06:44:08]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Grim Reaper
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 07:19:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| oh I love dark humour and unfortunately my job means it doesnt get any better, really enjoyed this esp belly up bucket kicked affairs in order coffin picked, |
|
|
Re: The Grim Reaper
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 07:41:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
What a delightful review of the "end". It's nice to see a different take on the final bow. :) Wonderfully written with exceptional rhyme and metre. The flow is perfection! Great post!
Seléne ~
|
|
|
Re: The Grim Reaper
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Thursday, 1st April 2010 @ 09:05:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi,
A terrific rendition on dark humour.
'Death, where is thy sting?'
Tommy
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
